Te kahu rolleston performances was my favourite poetry slam poet
A quote that really spoke to me was "forced to merge and lose each others unique diversity" i think thats what happens when we grow up i guess kinda lose our original personality and try to be the same as everyone losing our unique diversity
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thick snow on te ground
cold soothing air brushes past me
As snow
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Similes and metaphors
Simple and metaphors are both techniques used in descriptive writing they’re are used to create a mental picture on the readers mind
What is a simile?
A simile is a writing style that is used for comparing things to eachother,this writing style also uses words such as. like,as .ect
What is a metaphor
A metaphor is a figure of speech that is used to make a comparison between two things that aren't alike but do have something in common
You are as funny as a comedian
You are as smelly as a garbage can
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Language features/onomatopoeia
I’m learning about onomatopoeia and basically what this language feature is.Is it is a word or phrase that is similar to what you are talking about so basically you could be talking about water so u could use something to describe it like “splash” or drip ect——————————————————————————————————————-
Sensory language story
As the sun covers my skin I feel relaxed,The sound of waves filled my ears,as the waves crash up against me,The flavour is salt in my moth,I glimpse at the grey big ocean.
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